RE: One-day review: IESG charter update

["Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <bwijnen@lucent.com>]

wfm

Thanks,
Bert 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Harald Tveit Alvestrand [mailto:harald@alvestrand.no]
> Sent: dinsdag 3 juni 2003 14:32
> To: Wijnen, Bert (Bert); iesg@ietf.org
> Subject: RE: One-day review: IESG charter update
> 
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> --On tirsdag, juni 03, 2003 14:14:40 +0200 "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" 
> <bwijnen@lucent.com> wrote:
> 
> > OK, I re-read it.
> >
> > Comments:
> > - Do you/we want to add some text to 4th para of sect 6.
> >   What I mean is, do we want to specify that an AD can 
> create/disband
> >   directorates at will and that he/she can add/remove 
> directorate members
> >   at will as well?'
> 
> I already had "selected" in there, so I added "created".... 
> don't want to 
> be too long-winded about it.... I think the power to select 
> implies the 
> power to deselect, so that shouldn't need to be explicit....
> 
> new sentence:
> 
>           An AD may be advised by
>          one or more directorates, which are created, selected,
>          chaired and if necessary disbanded by
>          the AD
> 
> works?
> 
> > A few nits:
> >
> > - sect 1.2 1st para
> >   It says that RFC1602 has been updated by RFC1602?
> >
> > - sect 1.2 3rd para
> >   s/approeched/approached/
> >
> > - 1st sentence 2nd para sect 4.1
> >   s/addresse/address/  or s/addresse/addresses/ ??
> 
> fixed - thanks!
> 
> >
> > Otherwise: ship it!
> 
> ack!
> 
> >
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