draft-ietf-dhc-pktc-kerb-tckt

["Peterson, Jon" <jon.peterson@neustar.biz>]

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Jon Peterson       [   ]     [ X ]       [   ]      [   ]

I think it would be really helpful if the first sentence of the Abstract
identified this as a suboption of the "CableLabs Client Configuration (CCC)
_DHCP_ Option". As it stands, neither the title, Abstract nor the
Introduction mention DHCP (just the all-too-transient draft-ietf-dhc
string). If you didn't pause in the terminology section to look up the
reference for CCC, and see that it in turn has DHCP in the title, you would
not encounter the term DHCP until the IANA Considerations.

- J