Comments on draft-rfc-editor-rfc2223bis-07.txt

[Margaret Wasserman <mrw@windriver.com>]

Section 1.2.1 indicates that individual submissions are
reviewed by the RFC editor for various things (relevancy,
apporpriateness, compliance...), but it does not indicate
that the RFC editor reviews submissions that come through
the IESG or IAB.

This seems misleading, as I know that the RFC editor
does review (and sometimes modifies) IESG and IAB
submissions, particularly for editorial nits, and
perhaps for clarity.

Appendix B refers to document (example: 2-nroff.template),
without indicating where those documents can be found.

Margaret