draft-mrose-ietf-posting-03

[Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>]

Here is my suggested rewording to avoid the term "vote."

The 2nd paragraph of section 2...

OLD:

   As a part of its activities, the Internet Engineering Steering Group
   (IESG) votes on "actions". Typically, an action refers to the
   publication of a document on the standards-track, the chartering of a
   working group, and so on. This memo recommends that the IESG also
   undertake a new type of action, termed a PR-action.

NEW:

   As a part of its activities, the Internet Engineering Steering Group
   (IESG) makes decisions about "actions". Typically, an action
   refers to the publication of a document on the standards-track, the
   chartering of a working group, and so on. This memo recommends
   that the IESG also undertake a new type of action, termed a
   PR-action.

The numbered list in section 2...

OLD:

   1.  it is introduced by an IESG Area Director (AD), who, prior to
       doing so, may choose to inform the interested parties;

   2.  is is published as an IESG last call on the IETF general
       discussion list;

   3.  it is discussed by the community;

   4.  it is discussed by the IESG; and, finally,

   5.  it is voted upon by the IESG.

NEW:

   1.  it is introduced by an IESG Area Director (AD), who, prior to
       doing so, may choose to inform the interested parties;

   2.  it is published as an IESG last call on the IETF general
       discussion list;

   3.  it is discussed by the community;

   4.  it is discussed by the IESG; and, finally,

   5.  using the usual consensus-based process, it is decided
       upon by the IESG.