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Re: Splitting into several docs; more extensive use/emphasis of profiles
Hi George.
OK...this is right up my alley and I will take a look at the profiles
section next week and see what modifications I can suggest. Please forward
any other comments you personally get regarding the profiles to the list or
me so I can try and incorporate. Do you still want me to "own" the profile
section for editing? What is your timeframe for trying to have the next
rev ready?
- merike
----- Original Message -----
From: George M. Jones
Sent: 6/11/2003 8:22:55 PM
To: opsec@ops.ietf.org
Subject: Splitting into several docs; more extensive use/emphasis of profiles
> [Someone not on the list] wrote:
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> > At 10:43 PM 6/11/2003, you wrote:
> >
> >> [Someone not on the list] wrote:
> >>
> >>>
> >>> Your document has some significant flaws. Example: You appear to
> >>> require the presence of MPLS (2.13.1). This may not have been your
> >>> intent, but it's what's there. I really don't want MPLS running on
> >>> my laptop. Your document says elsewhere these are requirements for
> >>> hosts, routers, and other devices.
> >>>
> >>> This could be remedied by saying "For devices implementing MPLS,
> >>> ..." or some such.
> >>>
> >>> Please reread your document thinking about what types of devices
> >>> REALLY need to meet each of the items you suggest.
> >>>
> >>> Your document is really more oriented toward routers, and at that
> >>> CORE routers.
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> It admitedly has baggage that shows its heratage (UUNET's
> >> requirements for core and egdge devices); you've hit on one of them.
> >> The profiles mechanism is is intended to be a vehicle for grouping
> >> things appropriatly.
> >>
> >>> I think it'd be a good idea to do a fair bit of rework to make
> >>> clearer what's really important, and why, rather than trying to
> >>> dictate the feature set of all devices on the Internet.
> >>>
> >>> Keep in mind a host, or a $60 NAT box running at someone's house or
> >>> small office is just not going to be an appropriate target of your
> >>> document.
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> I think a pass needs to be made aimed at making each of the
> >> requirements more standalone and then emphasizing the use of profiles
> >> to determine different sets of needs (core, edge, toaster...)
> >
> >
> > That'd work.
> >
> > Might also make sense to split this into a family of documents, which
> > likely would improve readability.
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> I've considered that. It might also solve the BCP vs. Non-BCP problem.
> Also, might help with editing. Size and information density
> are starting to make it hard to edit/modify already. I'll put it on the
> list of possible changes for -01.
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> Thanks,
> ---George
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