The first paragraph of the Introduction indicates that the QPIM includes a standard framework for controlling access to network QoS resources. Yet, I do not find any discussion of authentication, authorization, or access control. The discussion of admission control actions is not sufficient to meet fulfill the expectation of the Introduction. At a minimum, access control should be discussed in the Security Considerations.Yes No-Objection Discuss Abstain Russ Housley [ ] [ ] [ X ] [ ]