evaluation: draft-ietf-hubmib-power-ethernet-mib

[hardie@qualcomm.com]

Ted Hardie           [   ]     [ x  ]     [   ]     [   ]

Notes:

    pethPsePortTable OBJECT-TYPE
          SYNTAX      SEQUENCE OF PethPsePortEntry
          MAX-ACCESS  not-accessible
          STATUS      current
          DESCRIPTION
              "A table of objects that display and control the power
               characteristics power Ethernet ports on a Power Source

--->missing "of" in "characteristics of power Ethernet ports"?


        pethPsePortPowerPairsControlAbility OBJECT-TYPE
       SYNTAX TruthValue
       MAX-ACCESS read-only
       STATUS current
       DESCRIPTION
            "Describes the capability of controlling the power pairs
            functionality to switch pins for sourcing power.
            The value true indicate that the device has the capability
            to control the power pairs. When false the PSE Pinout
            Alternative used cannot be controlled through the
            PethPsePortAdminEnabe attribute."

--->should be PethPsePortAdminEnable?

       pethPsePortPowerPairs OBJECT-TYPE
       SYNTAX INTEGER   {
                  signal(1),
                  spare(2)
        }
       MAX-ACCESS read-write
       STATUS current
       DESCRIPTION
           "Describes or controls the pairs in use. If the value of
            pethPsePortPowerPairsControl is true, this object is
            writable.
            A value of signal(1) menas that the signal pairs

--->menas should be means?