Evaluation: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-routing-08

[Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>]

COMMENT on draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-routing-08:

  The Abstract is very weak.  I propose:

       This document specifies routing extensions in support of carrying
       link state information for Generalized Multi-Protocol Label Switching
       (GMPLS).  This document enhances the routing extensions required to
       support MPLS Traffic Engineering (TE).

  Move the single paragraph in section 1 to the top of section 2.  This will
  turn section 2 into a very good introduction.

  Spell out first use of SPF.

DISCUSS on draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-gmpls-extensions-11:

  Need a normative reference for IEEE floating point format.

COMMENT on draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-gmpls-extensions-11:

  Move the single paragraph in section 1 to the top of section 2.  This 
will turn
  section 2 into a very good introduction.