Re: FW: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-scenarios-03.txt

[Pekka Savola <pekkas@netcore.fi>]

On Tue, 29 Jun 2004, Soininen Jonne (Nokia-NET/Helsinki) wrote:
> if nobody cries very loudly within ca. 24 hours. This is going to the
> IESG.

I don't think this addresses my personal comments.  The most important 
of them, an applicability statement about a security defence network 
(supported by Richard Graveman at least), hasn't been included.

There are also some others which I'm not sure why they weren't 
included, I think Yanick's reply on the list OK'ed some of them.

BTW, wrt. Margaret's comment, there are no too long lines in the 
draft, but some lines have been wrapped due to being too long (that's 
what she was referring to, I think), and should be fixed.

> On Tue, 2004-06-29 at 07:30, ext Bound, Jim wrote:
> > WG,
> > 
> > Chairs asked me to send this note to you. Updated spec below. First
> > error below I am just the editor see authors in the spec.  What we did
> > and I as editor is took 100% Alain's and Pekka's input as best we could
> > for additional clarity.  But, in section 4 we put additional note that
> > this section is more of an overview that the reader must look at as
> > components and all the components would fill up many pages (as all
> > scenarios) and more of that is analysis as opposed to defining a
> > scenario, and analysis is the next step.  We also added normative
> > references we felt were applicable to the spec that exist and talk about
> > the general subject (e.g. DNS, Applications).  I as one author may not
> > be able to respond to mail this week as I am abroad in Europe, but will
> > do my best.  
> > 
> > Regards,
> > /jim
> > 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: owner-v6ops@ops.ietf.org [mailto:owner-v6ops@ops.ietf.org] On
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> > Sent: Monday, June 28, 2004 3:31 PM
> > To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> > Cc: v6ops@ops.ietf.org
> > Subject: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-scenarios-03.txt
> > 
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> > directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the IPv6 Operations Working Group of the
> > IETF.
> > 
> > 	Title		: IPv6 Enterprise Network Scenarios
> > 	Author(s)	: J. Bound
> > 	Filename	: draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-scenarios-03.txt
> > 	Pages		: 16
> > 	Date		: 2004-6-28
> > 	
> > This document describes the scenarios for IPv6 deployment within
> > Enterprise networks.  It will focus upon an Enterprise set of network
> > base scenarios with assumptions, coexistence with legacy IPv4 nodes,
> > networks, and applications, and network infrastructure requirements.
> > These requirements will be used to provide analysis to determine a set
> > of Enterprise solutions in a later document.
> > 
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