RE: FW: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-scenarios-03.txt

["Bound, Jim" <jim.bound@hp.com>]

Pekka,

All of your comments were addressed.

We are not removing the Seucrity Defense scenarios it is important the
market.  No one but you complained you were out voted essentially.  So
forget that aspect of your input answer is NO.  

Regarding other comments please relay what you think we missed.  But no
one else is complaining but you.

/jim 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Pekka Savola [mailto:pekkas@netcore.fi] 
> Sent: Wednesday, June 30, 2004 2:04 AM
> To: Soininen Jonne (Nokia-NET/Helsinki)
> Cc: Bound, Jim; v6ops@ops.ietf.org
> Subject: Re: FW: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-scenarios-03.txt
> 
> On Tue, 29 Jun 2004, Soininen Jonne (Nokia-NET/Helsinki) wrote:
> > if nobody cries very loudly within ca. 24 hours. This is 
> going to the 
> > IESG.
> 
> I don't think this addresses my personal comments.  The most 
> important of them, an applicability statement about a 
> security defence network (supported by Richard Graveman at 
> least), hasn't been included.
> 
> There are also some others which I'm not sure why they 
> weren't included, I think Yanick's reply on the list OK'ed 
> some of them.
> 
> BTW, wrt. Margaret's comment, there are no too long lines in 
> the draft, but some lines have been wrapped due to being too 
> long (that's what she was referring to, I think), and should be fixed.
> 
> > On Tue, 2004-06-29 at 07:30, ext Bound, Jim wrote:
> > > WG,
> > > 
> > > Chairs asked me to send this note to you. Updated spec 
> below. First 
> > > error below I am just the editor see authors in the spec. 
>  What we 
> > > did and I as editor is took 100% Alain's and Pekka's 
> input as best 
> > > we could for additional clarity.  But, in section 4 we put 
> > > additional note that this section is more of an overview that the 
> > > reader must look at as components and all the components 
> would fill 
> > > up many pages (as all
> > > scenarios) and more of that is analysis as opposed to defining a 
> > > scenario, and analysis is the next step.  We also added normative 
> > > references we felt were applicable to the spec that exist 
> and talk 
> > > about the general subject (e.g. DNS, Applications).  I as 
> one author 
> > > may not be able to respond to mail this week as I am abroad in 
> > > Europe, but will do my best.
> > > 
> > > Regards,
> > > /jim
> > > 
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: owner-v6ops@ops.ietf.org 
> [mailto:owner-v6ops@ops.ietf.org] On 
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> > > Sent: Monday, June 28, 2004 3:31 PM
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> > > Cc: v6ops@ops.ietf.org
> > > Subject: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-scenarios-03.txt
> > > 
> > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line 
> Internet-Drafts 
> > > directories.
> > > This draft is a work item of the IPv6 Operations Working Group of 
> > > the IETF.
> > > 
> > > 	Title		: IPv6 Enterprise Network Scenarios
> > > 	Author(s)	: J. Bound
> > > 	Filename	: draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-scenarios-03.txt
> > > 	Pages		: 16
> > > 	Date		: 2004-6-28
> > > 	
> > > This document describes the scenarios for IPv6 deployment within 
> > > Enterprise networks.  It will focus upon an Enterprise set of 
> > > network base scenarios with assumptions, coexistence with legacy 
> > > IPv4 nodes, networks, and applications, and network 
> infrastructure requirements.
> > > These requirements will be used to provide analysis to 
> determine a 
> > > set of Enterprise solutions in a later document.
> > > 
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> Netcore Oy                    kingdom bleeds."
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