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RE: Evaluation: draft-vaudreuil-mdnbis - Message Disposition Notification to Draft Standard



>                     Yes    No-Objection  Discuss *  Abstain  
> Bert Wijnen         [   ]     [ X ]       [   ]      [   ]

Oh well ... this ID-NITs byte us again:

- Many lines are beyond column 72, many pages are too long.
  Summary:
    -: 430 lines longer than 72 characters, max 76
    -: 32 pages longer than 58 lines, max 61 lines

- Example on page 13:
      Reporting-UA:  rogers-mac.dcrt.nih.gov; Foomail 97.1

  Should be something at example.com, no?

- Same for the example on page 27

- References not split in normative and informative

Other nits:
- bottom page 18. Is it just a closing ) that is missing, or more text?
  It says:       should follow the "X-", (e.g. "X Foomail


Bert