Re: Internal WG Review: Recharter of IP Telephony (iptel)

["James Kempf" <kempf@docomolabs-usa.com>]

> The chief problem (at least in the earlier version, and I don't
> think it was fixed in the subsequent minor revisions) was that
> did not stick to descriptive, factual roadmap/tutorial, but
contained a lot of
> material that was one person's interpretation of history/projections
> for how things ought to be done.  That detracted a lot from
> the objective of giving an introduction to the uninitiated, and
> contributed greatly to the unease felt by many who had been involved
> in some of hte design decisions.
>

draft-schulzrinne-iptel-arch-00.pdf was more descriptive.

But perhaps still not enough.

            jak